Extremely odd...
I'll start off by being fair and reviewing it based on the fact that it's a comic, rather than an interesting flash animation, which is what Newgrounds is looking for.
The graphics inside the comic were horrible, it looked like you drew it with Paint and touched it up with Photoshop, then distorted the backround. The storyline was stupid; I had no idea what was going on, there wasn't enough comics to show anything interesting happen.
This is a poor excuse for a flash animation on newgrounds, and I suggest not placing the Second Set on here.